6
Jun

Review: Princess of the Midnight Ball

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Princess of the Midnight Ball
Princess of the Midnight Ball by Jessica Day George
My rating: 5 of 5 stars

Oh my awesomeness! I so loved this book. I thought it might be a little too “girlie” for me, but I love Jessica’s writing and decided to read it anyway. It had all I could have wanted – romance, fighting, chivalry, war, family issues, magic, lovable characters, and intrigue.

I am looking forward to getting into the next book in the series (Princess of Glass).

Setting: This is set in a land similar to western Europe and Germany, using some German names and German-sounding names. It mostly takes place at and around the castle (this is a re-imagining of the fairy tale of the 12 dancing princesses) and at the realm of the enemy (keeping it vague to avoid spoilers).

Plot: The princesses must dance every night but cannot tell anyone why. They are cursed and are in trouble, especially when all the princes who are courting them mysteriously die. A young gardener, recently returned from the war decides to help them and get to the bottom of the mystery, even if it means his own death.

Conflict: There is the conflict between the king and the princesses, the princesses and the dancing, the princes and trying to figure out the mystery, the gardener and his uncle, the king and the archbishop, and the big baddie and everyone!

Character: Even though the princesses tended to blend together a lot at first, I liked the little cues and differences that came out throughout the story to help differentiate them and make them all more real. The gardener was especially adorable in his crush on the oldest princess (and the princess on him).

Text: This is a YA novel (I assume because of the age of the protagonist) but it has some good adult themes. I highly recommend it to anyone and everyone.

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6
Jun

Review: The Horse Whisperer

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The Horse Whisperer
The Horse Whisperer by Nicholas Evans
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

I really enjoyed the first 2/3 of this book. Then the last 1/3 was all about adultery. It just didn’t seem to fit in with the rest of the story. And the conclusion totally destroyed the message I got from the first part of the book.

However, I did find it to be written well and the characters felt real (through the first 2/3 of the book). I would probably read another book by this author because of that.

Setting: The story is set in New York for much of the first act of the book. They end up in Wyoming for the rest of the book. The author did not spend a lot of time on descriptions except to say something was beautiful or snowy or whatever, but that let me imagine on my own.

Plot: A girl and a horse learn to trust each other again with the help of a persistent mother and a patient cowboy who has a special way with horses. There were other subplots too – job difficulties, marriage difficulties, the adultery, overcoming pride.

Conflict: There was the girl and horse conflict, the inner conflicts of both of them, the conflict between the parents and girl, the mom and girl, the girl and the cowboy, the mom and the cowboy, the mom and the dad, the cowboy’s relatives and the outsiders, the horse and just about anyone who interacted with him, the law suits, the mom’s job situation . . .

This is what really kept the book moving along – there were so many conflicts at many different levels.

Characters: They all felt very real, and I loved how I was able to get into the head of the horse through the cowboy. I totally got teared up at that point.

Text: The writing was fluid and easy to follow.

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31
May

LTUE – Queries and Pitches

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This entry is part 3 of 6 in the series LTUE 2012

Donna Milakovic, Lisa Mangum, J. Scott Savage, Chris Shoebinger, Kirk Shaw

Different types of queries – with manuscript, without, requested, slush

Different types of pitches – verbal (elevator pitch), high concept (take small idea and make it your hook, make it big). What makes your book different? Be enthusiastic about your story – infectious.

* manuscript.com – good info on pitches

Make sure to tell the ending. Position it for them – take subgenre and associate your book with titles there (not necessarily A-list titles).

Be simple, memorable, powerful, then stop talking!

4 sentences is about right.

Think of ways to increase your value to the publisher (in publicity, marketing)

Have others give honest reviews before sending your manuscript.

Publishers are more interested in building a brand.

After writing 1st book in a series, start a new project. This is so that if the 1st one gets rejected, the 2nd in the series is useless.

 

30
May

LTUE – What Exactly Does an Editor Do?

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This entry is part 2 of 6 in the series LTUE 2012

Lisa Mangum, Joshua Perkey, Kirk Shaw, Rick Walton, Stacy Whitman

Editors are not really copy-editing. Work on bigger picture.

Editors are a writer’s biggest advocate.

Get to know editors. Social media too.

Editors facilitate communication between reader and author.

If editor suggests a change, you can come up with your own solution for solving the problem.

Editors are starting to allow simsubs (simultaneous submissions).

Important to keep the reader hooked after the first few chapters.

Some writers start in the wrong spot – editors may be able to help.

Editors can help fix characterization, pacing, plot. But, they don’t want to have to fix everything!

Editors can’t fix voice.

30
May

LTUE – Marketing and Publicity

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This entry is part 1 of 6 in the series LTUE 2012

I have been so busy and such a procrastinator that I have neglected to put my LTUE 2012 notes up here. So, I will be posting them all over the next several days.

LTUE was February 9-11, 2012. This year it was held at Utah Valley University (UVU), and it was a great event.

So, on to my notes . . .

Marketing and Publicity

Bree Despain, Lynn Hardy, Jenn Johansson, Elana Johnson, Chris Schoebinger

You can pitch ideas to your publisher.

  • Bree’s nail polish
  • LibraryThing and Goodreads – giveaways (free ebooks) (goodreads giveaways require hard copy)
  • Amazon Kindle Forum (don’t talk about your own book)
  • Charity Work (donating proceeds from book)
  • Bridge book – combine book/paper with eBook (prequel? bridge story?)

* Marketing is about throwing stuff out and seeing what sticks.

  • Good Things Utah, Utah Valley Magazine
  • Build your platform – be interesting and entertaining, even a group blog. social media, book bloggers.
  • Publish more each year. Multiple releases. Anthologies.
  • Check out what others are doing.
  • Conferences
  • * Pick a couple things you enjoy and can make an impact with.
  • * Sandra Mitchell – marketing blog. Timeline. Postcards.
  • “I wanna get my books in the hands of kids for a reduced price”
  • Signings aren’t great except maybe in release month. Launch party. Presentation beforehand?

 

21
May

Biking to Work

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Tom Johnson over at IdRatherBeWriting.com inspired me to try biking to work (http://idratherbewriting.com/2012/04/11/finally-biking-to-work/).

It has been a bit of an adventure, but I’m really liking it. I started out using my (almost) 20 year old mountain bike. And, although it is only about 10 miles for me to get to work, it is uphill both ways 😉

Actually it is mostly downhill on the way to work and mostly uphill on the way home, especially the last big hill before I get to my house.

It took me about 1 hour and 15 minutes the first day (each way), which is not too bad. I was encouraged. Then, on the second day, about 3 miles from work, I got a flat – and I had not packed a spare or even a pump! Not smart, I know. So, I got to walk the bike all the way there (minus a mile or so since I could drop it off at my sister-in-law’s house – thanks Kristen!). I also had to be picked up that evening.

The third time, things went pretty smoothly, I got to work in about an hour, but coming home I had a head wind and it took me almost 2 hours. Ouch!

But, as a present for my anniversary, we got me a brand new road bike, all composite, nice components, and all the stuff to go with it (biking clothes and clip in shoes and tire repair kits). So now we can go biking together – especially to the Ulcer at the beginning of August (100 miles around Utah Lake). I’m excited but nervous. That is a looooooooooonnnnnnng way to bike.

But, this morning it was great to ride the new bike to work and how easy it was to pedal and everything. I was a little scared of the speed so it took me just under an hour, but I expect things to pick up as I get in better shape and my fear is suppressed with experience.

I’m so glad I can finally do this because I love it already!

3
May

Review: The Robots of Dawn

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The Robots of Dawn
The Robots of Dawn by Isaac Asimov
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

Classic Asimov.

I liked how he referred to previous events and tied things together that happened in other books. In fact, I decided to reread the series from the beginning because I’ve forgotten how it started (at I, Robot) and what happened. Then, I’ll move on to the next books in the series that I haven’t read yet.

I love how he just kind of stumbles into things blindly but still is able to see connections and make great inferences.

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3
May

Review: Seeds of Rebellion

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Seeds of Rebellion
Seeds of Rebellion by Brandon Mull
My rating: 5 of 5 stars

Holy Hippo!

I sped through this book so quickly because I wanted to know what would happen so bad.

I was a little disappointed that the big baddy didn’t make an appearance – but I liked seeing the characters struggle against foes that were still challenging.

I also loved the zombies! Totally cool idea.

I’m anxiously looking forward to the next installment.

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3
May

Review: The Demon King

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The Demon King
The Demon King by Cinda Williams Chima
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

I’m so mad! I need to read the rest of the “book” soon because I really want to know what is going to happen. 😉

This book reads like it was originally one long story that was broken up because YA don’t want long books (a publisher-type decision). However, this does not work as well for this book because there are lots of open plot threads at the end of the book (hence my frustration).

I enjoyed the characters and plots that wound through this book, although I thought the main character was a little dense to not think that the magicians would come looking for the magic item.

I recommend reading this book when you have all (or at least most) of the series ready to read back-to-back.

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13
Mar

Review: California Gold

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California Gold
California Gold by John Jakes
My rating: 5 of 5 stars

It was so much fun reading about early California (late 1800s to early 1900s), especially since part of the action happened in southern California and specifically in Riverside. I kept thinking – I know where that is – and it made the journey through this thick tome that much more exciting for me.

This is the story of a boy’s search for fortune and love.

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